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DOUBLE K REMASTERED - PAGE 008by ~captainosaka

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Fan Comics

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The small stuff, like I've said before, adds up. Nono's face in the first panel, for instance, was so grossly misshapen in the original that I couldn't believe I'd drawn it in the first place (eyes don't go on peoples' foreheads WHAATTT). Other things, like the white highlights on Kamina's hair/jacket in the original, were touches that I abandoned very quickly in favor of a more high-contrast style, so they needed to be made consistent. Also, these very early pages have a lot of totally unnecessary drop shadows that make things too busy, so I cut down on those, while at the same time accentuating tiny details (look at Simon in the last panel compared to the old one). I went ahead and added some screentone to make sure the girls stood out in the foreground of panel 2, as well as to draw more attention to Kamina's changing expressions in the following panels.

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~rabidepicgoose Sep 5, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Can you please update the regular comic? Pleeeeeease...

~Psycho-Gaze Aug 26, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

There are tiny bits I like in the old better than the new (Asuka in the 1st, mostly), but you're right in that it does read a lot better now!
Also new 5th panel: Lookin' kinda Spike there, Kamina.