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DOUBLE K REMASTERED - PAGE 009 by captainosaka DOUBLE K REMASTERED - PAGE 009 by captainosaka
The biggest change here is, of course, that first panel. The original totally does not come close to selling the panic I was trying to get across; simply raising his shoulders and spreading his elbow out a little bit completely changes the character of the pose. Plus, now he's sporting that awesome lantern jaw that both he and Kittan rock whenever they're yelling in the later pages. CONSISTENCY

I also removed a lot of unnecessary lines in the 4th panel. The focal point is the car, obviously, and having that extra negative space helps with that focus. Also, that last panel was a mess. I took great pleasure in cleaning that one up and adding some more detail.

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:icongeneralfoley:
Generalfoley Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
I kinda liked the first panel of the first version. Always felt like it was Kamina's "Oh Shit" face, ya know?
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:iconredventure:
RedVenture Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I still want a car clicker with a 'go time' button on it.
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:icontekena1200:
tekena1200 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm really aching over kamina's chin in the new version. I like most other changes though.
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:icondarkmenwar787:
Darkmenwar787 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Writer
The before page's car seems a little bit....I don't have a word for it but something less than better but more than cooler.
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:icondieman:
Dieman Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LANTERN JAW. WHAT IS THIS WORD, I LOVE IT
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:iconjaver:
Javer Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
CHIN MAXIMIZATION DEVICE
ENGAGE
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:iconpuricoxd:
puricoXD Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're style has changed so much! amazing !
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:icongraven-imaging:
Graven-Imaging Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
Press "GO TIME"

Get Gurrenmobile.

Seems totally legitimate and totally awesome amazing.

Glad to see we're keeping it consistent.
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Porecomesis Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
Yeah, definitely much better work.

I also like how everything's much cleaner.
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:iconhazmaster:
hazmaster Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Every car starter should have a "Go Time!" button...
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