I'm not too sure why I had such trouble drawing smoke clouds way back when, but that's a moot point now! Dude actually looks like he's melting some serious rubber this time around. Also, corrected another case of FOREHEAD-EYES in the third panel. How I kept letting that slide is beyond me
Also JESUS those action lines in the last panel are miserable in the original. There's like... no contrast between the truck and the rest of the panel. It looks like they're just disappearing into ACTION LINE ETHER. CONTRAST, kids. It is important. Especially when you're working with black and white.
I actually distinctly remember getting disgusted with that exact panel when I was drawing it way back when and saying "well that's good enough". What a wang, hahaha-previous--next-