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I'm not too sure why I had such trouble drawing smoke clouds way back when, but that's a moot point now! Dude actually looks like he's melting some serious rubber this time around. Also, corrected another case of FOREHEAD-EYES in the third panel. How I kept letting that slide is beyond me

Also JESUS those action lines in the last panel are miserable in the original. There's like... no contrast between the truck and the rest of the panel. It looks like they're just disappearing into ACTION LINE ETHER. CONTRAST, kids. It is important. Especially when you're working with black and white.

I actually distinctly remember getting disgusted with that exact panel when I was drawing it way back when and saying "well that's good enough". What a wang, hahaha

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~krourou2 Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh jeebus. I just realized what the license plate says. XD
And I personally prefer the way Kamina's teeth were drawn in the original second panel.
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~Javer Aug 5, 2012
For the record, I'm digging these "Inside the Artist's (Manga)Studio" blurbs.
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~Bloody-Vall Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dude you put two more exhaust pipes under gurren pod imagine the sound it's making in this panel
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~CrimsonPhoenix006 Aug 5, 2012
That description. It's really true that an artist is his own worst critic huh?

We all love the effort you're putting into these! It's gonna look soooooo good in the end.
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~yayabooboo Aug 4, 2012
i should also mention my favorite page so far (from the original) is when kamina jumps out of the trash can LOL loved it
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~yayabooboo Aug 4, 2012
you should've left it alone. i love seeing an artist improve with each page they make. and your style was already pretty awesome.
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~captainosaka Aug 4, 2012  Professional
Nah, couldn't do that. The old pages didn't print well at all, getting them to reproduce well on paper was the whole point of all this.
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~yayabooboo Aug 4, 2012
i didnt know you were printing it, then yea the new pages will look a lot better. its a great comic though, i hope you can start the new pages soon.
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~ayyk92 Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
At this rate you're going to redo everything up till the latest pages, then you'll go back and redo from the beginning again. And again and again like a never ending cycle.
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~captainosaka Aug 4, 2012  Professional
I had a nightmare about that actually

not even kidding
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