HOORAY it's Yoko again, sporting a design i'm STILL not happy with! I've almost got it right, though. SOON YOU WILL SEE
Uh, and for those of you who are just tuning in, I'm writing/drawing this thing called "Double K" which stars the cast of Gurren-Lagann in a ridiculous buddy-cop movie pastiche. It is going to be rad. Click
here, here, here, and
here for more info/art! (more in my gallery as well)
Character is ©GAINAX
EDIT: sorry about the lack of background but damn i don't like this design the more i look at it so it's going in scraps soon
IMHO, if you are removing the coat, you'll need to add some nifty bit that gets us feeling DA OLD COP MOVIE VIBE oozing off the screen with just a glance. The glasses are good as they are - I don't think anyone could outdo Gainax in that department; maybe you could try spicing the rifle up a bit? I'm not urging you to dangle a couple of neon pink plushy dice off the muzzle, mind you (that'd be awesome, though!), but DA GUN could use some customization to bring it to the level of crack you've got going in DOUBLE K.